What we are

Sacrifice indeed,
no I’m not your enemy.
My salvation as of yet,
no it’s not your promise.
Is this an attempt
not so inept to the senses,
for me to see through your eyes,
so deeply and strongly?
Though I wish,
I know the truth;
who you are,
who you have been.

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5 thoughts on “What we are

  1. Great emotion in this poem! Loved it.

  2. Heart says:

    I think trust and faith in loved ones or strangers is overrated.. Intelligent observation Dillon, and I like your new layout too! Just realised while writing this that I am on your blog roll! Thanks, I am humbled.
    Rachana.

  3. Scent of my heart says:

    who you are, who you have been… Don’t we all have one mystery person we wish to know more about … Nice post!

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